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孤星伴月

孤星伴月

金辇西行,远了
藏蓝的冰天已开始沦陷,于火,于水,于紫丁香的花冢
于一袭烟色薄纱,于重重灰黯的帷幕

独坐咖啡小屋
面对一杯浓黑的热饮
喝还是不喝?这不肯沾唇的苦涩

秒针如蹄,如你沉稳的脚步
等待,金色的回眸
等你张弓搭箭,弦满时
记得放松,松开绷紧生痛的指尖
洞开夜空第一枚箭孔
夜之魅,魅在梦中的诗囚
深邃的眼睛

2013-04-14 02:47:20
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William Zhou周道模 ?2013-04-14 08:31:25?? Reply with quote


标题和诗句好像?

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hepingdao ?2013-04-14 09:42:59?? Reply with quote


细微而有气势

等你张弓搭箭,弦满时
记得放松,松开绷紧生痛的指尖

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婉儿 ?2013-04-15 10:20:07?? Reply with quote


William Zhou周道模 wrote:
标题和诗句好像?

好像不见星月 Confused
择一晴日,放开视野,6.00pm~8.00pm举目远眺:夕阳渐落,新月如弓,折光似箭,金星洞穿天幕,,,,,, Arrow问好

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婉儿 ?2013-04-15 10:26:39?? Reply with quote


hepingdao wrote:
细微而有气势

等你张弓搭箭,弦满时
记得放松,松开绷紧生痛的指尖


谢谢理解,问好

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