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冷雨2010-12-24 06:17:58

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手边云起何时雨?笔下波生不待风!(唐-神颖)

伏案心头鹰展翅,扬眉神气兔顽童。

集成一律诗言志,舒缓全身一老翁。

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黄洋界 ?2013-01-07 23:46:02?? Reply with quote


“手边云起何时雨,笔下波生不待风”。好联!学习!

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qinghongh ?2013-01-08 07:08:04?? Reply with quote


黄洋界 wrote:
“手边云起何时雨,笔下波生不待风”。好联!学习!


欣赏!

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莹雪 ?2013-01-09 08:05:43?? Reply with quote


欣赏!

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笑聊 ?2013-01-12 08:47:01?? Reply with quote


黄洋界 wrote:
“手边云起何时雨,笔下波生不待风”。好联!学习!


黄老师好!谢谢赏读!这联是唐诗人神颖的诗句,这是诗社布置的作业。

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笑聊 ?2013-01-12 08:48:15?? Reply with quote


qinghongh wrote:
黄洋界 wrote:
“手边云起何时雨,笔下波生不待风”。好联!学习!


欣赏!


庆宏兄好!谢谢赏读!这联是唐诗人神颖的诗句,这是诗社布置的作业。

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笑聊 ?2013-01-12 08:49:03?? Reply with quote


莹雪 wrote:
欣赏!


问好莹雪妹!谢谢赏读!这联是唐诗人神颖的诗句,这是诗社布置的作业。

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莹雪 ?2013-01-13 11:09:40?? Reply with quote


笑聊 wrote:
莹雪 wrote:
欣赏!


问好莹雪妹!谢谢赏读!这联是唐诗人神颖的诗句,这是诗社布置的作业。

贵诗社雅兴令人神往!

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笑聊 ?2013-01-14 08:30:35?? Reply with quote


莹雪 wrote:
笑聊 wrote:
莹雪 wrote:
欣赏!


问好莹雪妹!谢谢赏读!这联是唐诗人神颖的诗句,这是诗社布置的作业。

贵诗社雅兴令人神往!


诗社时有活动。谢谢莹雪关心。

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