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古韵新音
西方文学 Western Literature
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Leaves and Buds

Leaves and buds 111207 130102

Shivering
and flapping wildly
in the piercing wind
the brown leaves
ragged and torn
hold fast
onto the half-stripped branches
to nurture
with the very last breath
the birth of the tiny buds --
so delicate
yet composed
whose fragrance
consoles
even the worst frostbitten souls

2013-01-01 10:03:34
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summer ?2013-01-04 12:06:02?? Reply with quote


laoshi, 我来学习

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hepingdao ?2013-02-28 12:03:36?? Reply with quote


pretty poem

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Lake ?2013-03-02 00:34:52?? Reply with quote


delicate.

Quote:
hold fast on
to the half-stripped branches


would like to see "on to" on the same line.

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SLIU ?2013-03-02 08:36:40?? Reply with quote


Thank you guys.
Lake, I changed it. Thanks!

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