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???Dancing, Swimming, Writing, Reading
????? ?????月光泉 Find all posts by 白水 冷雨2011-10-06 02:16:37问好临屏！
我想看到的就是古韵袅袅，其他的对我并不重要。 冷雨2010-12-24 06:15:09问候白水，圣诞节快乐！！
清源留字 亿七维2010-05-29 13:43:04问好白水！ 李盈枝2009-12-17 01:10:58过来拜读先生的新诗佳作，希望能从中汲取营养，以提高自己旧体诗词的习作水平。顺便向先生问好并致意。 君山楚女2009-11-22 15:55:12问候白水忘年兄。读您的作品，主我眼前一亮，慧心灵动。一篇好作品，一个好老师，确实能点破愚顽。 梦之2009-08-19 14:44:54向姐姐问好！ 很欣赏你的作品。
梦之 zmj1662009-08-17 02:34:36问好白水！ 万春来2009-06-13 16:49:42问候白水兄，前来问候！ 莹雪2009-06-07 16:35:14问好姐姐  |
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 Early Spring
Early Spring
Little birds fly back, singing
and picking snowflakes from the tree
The ice melts away,
floating and chasing the wave in the river
I stand near the window,
waiting silently
for the first thunder of spring
and the raindrops to drip into my poems
2011-02-23 13:23:36 |
| qinghongh ?2011-02-25 16:51:24?? |  |
the raindrop to drip into my poems
Wonderful!
from Wen & Qinghong
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| 博弈 ?2011-02-25 17:41:57?? | |
good.
raindrops maybe?
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| Lake ?2011-02-25 17:51:20?? | |
and snowflakes maybe, too?
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| 白水 ?2011-02-25 19:24:40?? | |
| qinghongh wrote: |
the raindrop to drip into my poems
Wonderful!
from Wen & Qinghong |
Hi, Qinghongh, Thanks a lot. Pls say "Hi" to Wen. Have a nice weekend. 
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| 白水 ?2011-02-25 19:29:55?? | |
| 博弈 wrote: |
good.
raindrops maybe? |
Hi, 博士，you are right, I changed it. Thanks
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| 白水 ?2011-02-25 19:35:03?? | |
| Lake wrote: |
| and snowflakes maybe, too? |
yea, you are right, thank you very much
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| 白水 ?2011-03-01 18:32:52?? | |
Early Spring
Little birds fly back, chirping
and picking snowflakes from the trees
Ice banks melt away,
floating and chasing the waves in the river
I stand near the window,
waiting silently
for the first thunder of spring
and raindrops to drip into my poems
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