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稚菊

百花皆落红，稚菊傲苍穹。
举杯邀林风，霜飘月正浓。

2010-12-24 06:21:29
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白水 ?2010-12-28 15:37:40?? Reply with quote


冷雨好， 清新小诗挺有意境，稍调几个字就是五绝了，若有兴趣不妨试试。

这个连接里有好多宝贝
http://oson.ca/cpoetry/check.php

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胡恢宗 ?2010-12-29 19:41:21?? Reply with quote


白水老师的善意，对我也有啟发。

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