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古韵新音
西方文学 Western Literature
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译:斑马

文:笑聊

--斑马--

一个挫折,
身上便留下一道鞭痕。
即便鞭痕累累,
却丝毫未减你倔强的雄姿。


译:sliu6

--Zebra--

A setback
Leaves a welt on the body
Even if there are plenty
Remains unaffected, your unyielding majesty

2010-08-29 02:51:40
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nightingale2 ?2010-09-03 23:11:01?? Reply with quote


哇,高手,学习了,看不出缺点,是因为我的水平太低,嗬嗬。
JOLLY GOOD. Very Happy

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SLIU ?2010-09-07 17:12:55?? Reply with quote


问候nightingale2!
谢谢评论。你很谦虚哦。。 Very Happy

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Lake ?2010-09-27 10:51:16?? Reply with quote


笑聊 应该来看看。

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笑聊 ?2010-09-29 05:56:49?? Reply with quote


诚挚地谢谢sliu6朋友,将拙作成功地进行了翻译。

感谢朋友们雅评与鼓励!

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