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蛞蝓

蛞蝓

我没有壳
没有避风港
没有房子
也没有家

我行在路上
躲闪人的脚步
触角长长
敏感是致命的
阿克琉斯之踵

A Slug

not having a shell
a shelter
a house
nor a home

always on the road
ducking the footsteps of man
with long antennas
sensitivity is my Achilles' heel

2010-7-16

2010-07-15 21:30:22
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Lake ?2010-07-19 08:25:34?? Reply with quote


Interesting. 用来比喻什么呢? Smile

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kino ?2010-07-19 15:48:16?? Reply with quote


呵呵,比喻我自己吧,权力、金钱、欲望、强权之下的柔软而没有抵抗力的小人。

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William Zhou周道模 ?2010-07-22 04:51:56?? Reply with quote


软体动物?没有看到过。诗可以有更多的层次。

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