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冷雨2010-12-24 06:17:58

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绝句-赞豪情

读白云兄（人生长河二）有感并临屏赋

绝句-赞豪情

振衣一笑展豪情，映日云帆四海行。
千浪翻腾闲事看，可燃枫叶染诗英。

2010-05-26 04:22:29
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千浪翻腾闲事看,信步优悠踱闲庭! 笑聊恬淡胸怀!

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笑聊 ?2010-05-27 03:24:43?? Reply with quote


谢谢白云兄雅评！

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影沉寒水 ?2010-05-27 03:26:52?? Reply with quote


转结语句比较牵强

直言

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笑聊 ?2010-05-27 03:48:49?? Reply with quote


[quote="影沉寒水"]转结语句比较牵强

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说对了。本想写律诗的，后来因为脑中杂事多而作罢。
谢谢兄台直言！

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