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【桃花宴】

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很久很久以前
我在庭院四周种下九百九十九颗桃树
密谋一场很久很久以后的桃花宴

清风微抚
理不清桃花和你的芬芳
两颊粉红 倒影在杯中
你比桃花更羞涩

桃花醉了
醉在你的胸前
一朵 两朵 三朵......
轻轻吻起
送到你鲜艳过桃花的双唇

很久很久了
树枝早已戳破了窗纸

2010-04-01 19:35:02
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子花 ?2010-04-07 23:12:43?? Reply with quote


提上,批评!!

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子花 ?2010-04-07 23:13:01?? Reply with quote


提上,批评!!

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白水 ?2010-04-08 17:39:29?? Reply with quote


wow, 九百九十九颗桃树, 不怕小猴来偷桃吃 Very Happy Very Happy

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子花 ?2010-04-08 22:22:10?? Reply with quote


哈哈!!
小猴都去动物园跟小朋友玩了!!

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山城子 ?2010-04-09 19:13:28?? Reply with quote


一场爱情的铺张!!

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江南雨 ?2010-04-09 19:19:56?? Reply with quote


很久很久了
树枝早已戳破了窗纸

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子花 ?2010-04-14 19:58:20?? Reply with quote


谢谢山城子老师和江南雨诗人阅读!!

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半溪明月 ?2010-04-15 19:13:15?? Reply with quote


很美,结尾耐人寻味~问好子花!

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子花 ?2010-04-16 18:14:31?? Reply with quote


半溪明月 wrote:
很美,结尾耐人寻味~问好子花!


愿听其详!!呵呵

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