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小草●蚂蚁●大树

一棵树与土地的
距离
被小草截断
轻飘的腰肢 扭动着
小草迎合无方向的风

有蚂蚁爬上树干
咬合自己残缺的梦
以寒风中的余温
大树默默裹紧它
纵然躯体千疮百孔

小草依旧在摇
蚂蚁还是在爬
大树却开满鲜花

2010-03-28 00:23:03
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安红红 wrote:
已读~~意境到了~语言表达方式欣缺些~~

谢关注,远握!

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白水 Moonlight wrote:
人生百相,尊者自尊 Very Happy Very Happy

问好,远握!

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