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 五绝 和白云闲人《人生几何》（古韵英译）
五绝 和白云闲人《人生几何》（古韵英译）
文/庆宏
人生有几何？岁月如穿梭。
剑赋青春志，笔吟瀚海歌。
After <Life in the World>
By Qinghong
How long is life in this world?
And the time flies like a shuttle;
Using a sharp sword,
You can realize your dream of young age;
And using a sharp pen,
You can surf on the knowledge ocean like Google!
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After <Life in the World>
By Qinghong
How long is life in this world?
And the time flies like a shuttle;
Your sharp sword,
Can draw a beautiful painting of young age dream;
Your sharp pen,
Can sing a wonderful song of knowledge ocean.
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白云闲人原玉：
人 生 几 何
< 调寄喜迁莺 >
闻莺唱,
展霞光,
酣睡春宵香.
梦中吟得一篇章,
醒后笑情长!
红日朗,
心花放,
北美楓园游荡.
临屏与友和高歌,
人生得几何!
2010-03-25 16:22:02 |
| nightingale2 ?2010-03-26 03:05:07?? |  |
喜欢最后一句的翻译，新颖有趣 
新春愉快！万事如意！
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| qinghongh ?2010-03-26 05:27:30?? | |
| nightingale2 wrote: |
喜欢最后一句的翻译，新颖有趣
新春愉快！万事如意！ |
谢谢诗友雅赏及问候！也问诗友好。新增译文如上，请指正。
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| 白水 ?2010-03-26 06:33:26?? | |
Hi， Qingh
A nice poem.
Suggestion:
And the time flies very fast like a shuttle;
Change to
And the time flies like a shuttle;
 
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| Lake ?2010-03-26 08:01:02?? | |
Just a quick note:
1. I agree with moonlight about removing "very fast", because "flies like a shuttle" implies the meaning of speed.
2. On the whole it reads well, but a bit of paraphrasing rather than translating.
e.g. the first line in Chinese is a question, the English version is a statement.
I'm not good at translation, but just want to tell how I feel.
Thanks for sharing.
Lake
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| qinghongh ?2010-03-26 08:32:33?? | |
谢谢白水及Lake的建议，修改如上。
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| SLIU ?2010-04-02 00:15:59?? | |
nice little poem...
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| qinghongh ?2010-04-02 05:32:10?? | |
| sliu6 wrote: |
| nice little poem... |
Thanks for your appreciation!
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| 王国栋 ?2010-07-12 05:43:40?? | |
静心学习，体会老师翻译的五绝，收获很多。
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