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斜倚床头不觉烦，

皱纹白发镜中喧。

窗前烟火停相问，

笑我年轮长一圈。

2010-02-22 21:20:40
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qinghongh ?2010-02-22 21:58:56?? Reply with quote


笑傲人间又一年。

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黄洋界 ?2010-02-22 22:46:15?? Reply with quote


"皱纹白发镜中喧".
"喧"字十分传神!问好!

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白云闲人 ?2010-02-23 09:21:29?? Reply with quote


形象生动!

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