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满眼芳菲总寂寞，一身锦绣枉逍遥.
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2009-12-28 13:38:06
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李盈枝 ?2009-12-28 22:51:14?? Reply with quote


不错！

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君遥 ?2009-12-29 06:42:55?? Reply with quote


想问师傅，七绝允许3仄尾吧？
满眼芳菲总寂寞(仄仄仄)

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李盈枝 ?2009-12-29 06:50:47?? Reply with quote


君遥 wrote:
想问师傅，七绝允许3仄尾吧？
满眼芳菲总寂寞(仄仄仄)
“不讲条件地谈避三仄尾，是尚未入门。”（中国情诗网总版主）

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