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迭前韵再酬      
既向征人赋别忱 
还从网路报知音 
三生织就文缘丽 
一往同潜学海深 
天地有情存白首 
光阴无碍拥丹心 
诗声听与香尘混 
疑是彤云翥凤吟 

2009-10-28 09:35:47
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野航 ?2009-10-28 17:00:29?? Reply with quote


天地有情存白首 
光阴无碍拥丹心 

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qinghongh ?2009-10-28 20:45:27?? Reply with quote


野航 wrote:
天地有情存白首 
光阴无碍拥丹心 


好句。

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杨光 ?2009-10-30 01:53:11?? Reply with quote


喜欢结尾的韵味。

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