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 A Full Moon Night.
A Full Moon Night.
Watching the moon of a pale white lantern
as I thought my mom was in the moon.
Dreaming myself riding a space-ship to my home town,
As I passed through the oceans and mountains.
Why I see my father is thinking deeply?
My daughter’s children are smiling with happiness?
Immediately I felt myself with a line of grand-children
Recalled my memory for my children playing fire works,
We entered the Victoria Garden in the Moon Festival.
Are you still sleeping in your dream?
You should believe I am always staying by your side.
2009-05-25 23:56:54 |
| William Zhou周道模 ?2009-07-03 20:12:25?? |  |
Maybe the word "as" on the second line and on the forth line are not needed.
Can we say "why I see" ?
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| sfiawong ?2009-07-05 20:31:14?? | |
| William Zhou周道模 wrote: |
Maybe the word "as" on the second line and on the forth line are not needed.
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如你說的..應是可以.
謝,謝你的提議!
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