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纥那曲 仙境

纥那曲 仙境(新韵)

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(一)
湖畔水清清,
柳枝摇曳情。
恬然观旷野,
何处纥那声?

(二)
田野草青青,
彩蝶忙不停。
赏花望碧野,
听唱纥那声。

2009-04-20 02:15:08
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白云闲人 ?2009-04-20 04:50:32?? Reply with quote


意境清新,自然流丽!

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qinghongh ?2009-04-20 06:32:35?? Reply with quote


问答用得妙。

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米运刚 ?2009-04-21 00:35:38?? Reply with quote


原谅我寡闻,何为“纥那声”?

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lulu ?2009-05-23 05:04:09?? Reply with quote


白云闲人 wrote:
意境清新,自然流丽!

谢白云老师赏评及鼓励!lulu给您问好!

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lulu ?2009-05-23 05:05:47?? Reply with quote


qinghongh wrote:
问答用得妙。

谢庆宏老师表扬,学生给您问好!

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lulu ?2009-05-23 05:11:16?? Reply with quote


米运刚 wrote:
原谅我寡闻,何为“纥那声”?

给您问好!谢谢您的赏阅,我也是刚刚领会该词牌,请多指教!

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