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春天,我说你是从上到下的

  春天呵!当你的脚步登陆人间
  我看到,你先是让天空变成天空
  让云儿形成云儿,它们
  是那般无忧又轻闲
  再让一窗清风流出
  唤醒了一山的叽叽喳喳
  而后,你贶一曲淅淅沥沥
  使得树丫开始调皮
  花儿在节奏里的激情地互相斗艳
  清泉再次回到往昔
  海洋底下的人间,同样
  听到你的千呼万唤,和
  如潮般清纯的诗语

   2009-02-05 
   贵州·三都

2009-02-11 19:54:27
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轩雨抚梦 ?2009-02-11 19:56:00?? Reply with quote


网络出现问题!劳烦版住删掉!谢谢!

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hepingdao ?2009-02-11 20:08:26?? Reply with quote


富有诗意

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孙国福 ?2009-02-12 00:37:03?? Reply with quote


呵呵,也许无心插柳柳成荫呢!!

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晴宝儿 ?2009-02-13 10:17:24?? Reply with quote


感受春天!

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轩雨抚梦 ?2009-02-21 16:39:15?? Reply with quote


感谢楼上各位老师!

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