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五绝问缘

给各位诗友问好，请指教！

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晨教说外语，
暮颂古诗词。
如若得知己，
人生一首诗。

2009-01-26 00:22:05

hepingdao ?2009-01-26 19:22:39??

早晨上班去
入暮归家来
公私两兼顾
黑白并徘徊
Laughing

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暗香如沁 ?2009-01-26 19:23:59??

结句提升.很好.

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lulu ?2009-01-27 08:52:25??

hepingdao wrote:

早晨上班去
入暮归家来
公私两兼顾
黑白并徘徊
Laughing

谢赏读和诗，问好！您的诗妙趣横生，很有意思！还望多多指教！

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lulu ?2009-01-27 09:04:57??

暗香如沁 wrote:

结句提升.很好.

谢玉赏雅评！还望多多指教！

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