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五绝 新春(和秋叶老师五绝 新春)

给各位诗友问好,请指教!

五绝 新春遐想

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昨 夜 残 烛 尽,
今 朝 盼 驻 妍。
与 君 同 祈 愿,
鸿 运 照 新 年!

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欣赏.祝愿很好。
从诗句的意境而言,这个一般了。

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lulu ?2009-01-27 08:39:02?? Reply with quote


暗香如沁 wrote:
欣赏.祝愿很好。
从诗句的意境而言,这个一般了。

问好暗香如沁!很欣赏您的佳作,很欣赏您的才华,请多多指教!

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