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七绝 夜思

给各位诗友问好,请指教!

七绝 夜思

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深夜窗前料峭寒,
一弯明月挂星间。
灯前倚案敲音韵,
弹奏光阴又一年。

2009-01-26 00:09:29
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结句很好。

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lulu ?2009-01-27 09:12:07?? Reply with quote


暗香如沁 wrote:
结句很好。

谢玉赏雅评!lulu深感水平有限,希望多向您学习!

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