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张南城2009-08-18 04:26:57

问候先生。

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送鼠迎牛

送旧岁鼠遁地远去
迎新年牛冲天近来

送鼠迎牛

2009-01-11 12:32:08
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白水 ?2009-01-11 15:56:15?? Reply with quote


Very Happy 真牛

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qinghongh ?2009-01-11 18:31:02?? Reply with quote


白水 Moonlight wrote:
Very Happy 真牛


希望新的一年大家都牛起来! Laughing Laughing Laughing

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海南丢 ?2009-01-11 21:47:48?? Reply with quote


qinghongh wrote:
送旧岁鼠遁地远去
迎新年牛冲天近来

送鼠迎牛


既然上联全仄,下联为什么不全平,而且“近”明显有碍于规则硬塞进来的痕迹,不如改成“长”,嘻嘻``

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qinghongh ?2009-01-12 08:05:17?? Reply with quote


有点意思。谢谢!

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