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《寄 友》之二

《寄 友》之二

山山水水,杖杖楫楫,嘗披雲裳霞衣。
鎏金證書一紙,黯然掖起。
踱踱尋尋覓覓,蹣跚裏、風風雨雨。
嶽麓峰,繾綣飛來石,銀杏輕依!

人生跌跌撞撞,似玩股、紅紅綠綠,
洗禮路彎流急,烏噪雞啼!
若得一川潑墨,塑崑崙、雪骨冰肌。
可憶得、兒時戲、欲攀摘星玄梯?


2008-12-01 16:04:05
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qinghongh ?2008-12-01 18:06:41?? Reply with quote


方天兄善用叠词!

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白云闲人 ?2008-12-02 07:03:58?? Reply with quote


"若得一川泼墨,塑昆仑,雪骨冰肌." 豪气云天!

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又一方天 ?2008-12-03 23:11:19?? 写 Reply with quote


白云闲人 wrote:
"若得一川泼墨,塑昆仑,雪骨冰肌." 豪气云天!


谢谢赏读!


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又一方天 ?2008-12-03 23:12:30?? Reply with quote


qinghongh wrote:
方天兄善用叠词!


谢谢玉览

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冰清 ?2008-12-08 11:34:37?? Reply with quote


意笃情真!

嶽麓峰,繾綣飛來石,銀杏輕依! "繾綣""輕依"出神韵.

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