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哺我琼浆盼吉祥,自甘辛苦咽糟糠。提携常望三冬暖,襁褓时防五夜凉。如此春晖滋寸草,那堪月色满高粱。仙游太早恩何报,泣向坟台吊一章。

2008-11-15 16:19:49
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通篇感情真挚,只“那堪月色满高粱”这一句薄弱了一些,

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