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雨时
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?????25 Apr 2008
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古韵新音
秋分
西关桥外楼千尺,落叶敲窗不忍听。
梦里此身谁与共,一轮明月满城星。
2008-09-22 03:44:57
不亦悦乎
?2008-09-24 07:07:38??
乍看觉得“一轮明月满城星”与“落叶敲窗不忍听”不相符,再念才感到作者的心情。
这起承转结非常好,真是好诗!
愿作者早日脱离惆怅的心情。
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雨时
?2008-09-26 05:33:50??
看了不亦悦乎君的回帖,心情好多了。欢迎常来指教。问好!
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