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 將進酒 (一诗複写）
將進酒
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我對著牆壁
將影子倒進酒杯
直到她滿溢
2.
as I was saying,
spitting out to the glass wall--
saga ways I sin.
ps. line 1 and line 3 share the same char. set.
2008-08-09 19:15:49 |
| William Zhou周道模 ?2008-08-11 13:55:54?? |  |
英语和汉语是两首不同的诗啊？
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| 博弈 ?2008-08-11 21:33:00?? | |
| William Zhou周道模 wrote: |
| 英语和汉语是两首不同的诗啊？ |
呵，是不同
一个倒影子入酒杯
一个倒醉话到玻璃壁上
写时没想那么多，后设的解释喽。
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| Lake ?2008-08-13 09:43:12?? | |
Wow, two haikus.
Sorry, I first read 'saga' as 'sake'. 
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| kino ?2008-08-13 16:56:28?? | |
saga是英语还是日语？confused 
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| 博弈 ?2008-08-13 17:59:45?? | |
谢谢 蕾珂 与 奇诺， 
saga, though sounds like a jap., is an eng. word, or of iceland.
you should be able to find it in a dictionary, saga is not a rarely used word these days, for example in an internet game, or an adventure telling movie, and etc..
here, more like a prose narrative; 我用为“无韵味的唠叨"
Lake's first sight reminds me of the 'phrase' (I made it up)
pour the saga of one's life into surrounding ears
as if a body is a bottle, an ear is a glass,
saga? well, what's in a bottle.
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| Lake ?2008-08-14 10:46:24?? | |
Cool, got a cartoon name here.
Lake's first sight reminds me of the 'phrase' (I made it up)
Somewhat. But then I did look it up.
Well, this saga sounds pretty long then
PS: In everyday English, a lot of native English speakers pronounce -ing as -in, so I can also take this line,
saga ways I sin
as 'saga ways I sing' 
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| Lake ?2008-08-17 10:59:32?? | |
I'm reading Basho's Saga Diary now. So, 'saga' can be the name of a place or a literary term.
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