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鲜橙


六月的早晨,风滑过风声
你轻含波西米亚少女一样的笑容
裸着被阳光漂得黑亮的上身
用白瓷盘送来一枚鲜橙

张开温暖的手掌,轻握这枚
沾着露水的浆果。顿时它
清凉的光滑渗入掌心并弥漫开去
嗅一嗅,引起深而悠长的呼吸

看着湿润闪亮的黑眼睛,我问:
"这果中藏有怎样神秘的甜蜜?"
你眼波流转,黠笑盈盈,答曰:
"诗人啊,总在譬东喻西"

2008-06-04 06:26:54
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无意无言 ?2008-06-04 07:20:40?? Reply with quote


含笑的鲜橙

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悠子 ?2008-06-04 07:51:54?? Reply with quote


聪明的鲜橙

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红袖添乱 ?2008-06-04 16:51:35?? Reply with quote


沁凉的鲜橙~

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曲元奇 ?2008-06-04 21:58:58?? Reply with quote


鲜橙的鲜橙

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拈花微笑 ?2008-06-05 02:41:59?? Reply with quote


谢诸位赏橙

Smile

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詩盜喜裸評 ?2008-06-05 09:26:57?? Reply with quote


鲜橙的鲜橙~沿用。

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红袖添乱 ?2008-06-05 14:03:20?? Reply with quote


好吧,我就不客气了。
趁你们赞美的功夫~~~我先尝尝~~

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