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秋绿

秋绿

仿佛是　时间开的玩笑

当秋阳暖暖的照射
一抹新绿
开放在秋的枯黄里

是季节
走错了脚步
叩响了不属于自己的心门

而那绿
随着肃杀的严冬
长眠

2006-05-29 17:07:22
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尹士林 ?2006-05-29 18:01:44?? 恭喜 Reply with quote


恭喜啊！有进步，继续努力！

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乐园成也 ?2006-05-29 19:22:29?? Reply with quote


意境不错：））欢迎常来！

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郁雪 ?2006-05-31 01:17:03?? 问好 Reply with quote


感谢　各位　多多关照　多多批评指正

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