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读安国《黄山诗草》

羡君捷足上黄山,带得黄山风景还。雪浪松涛随袖底,峰奇云幻落杯间。胸藏岩壑诗多险,笔吐烟霞我欲攀。读到太平湖一韵,至今犹听水潺潺。

2008-04-30 02:38:44
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黄洋界 ?2008-04-30 12:25:50?? Reply with quote


读他人诗章,写个人感受,竟如亲临其境.足见原作之佳,读者之切.

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松云老人 ?2008-04-30 15:52:32?? Reply with quote


总体如黄版议,颔联略宽。

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是有缘 ?2008-05-01 15:53:20?? Reply with quote


句句有味,把个黄山之景写得跃然眼前。

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