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黄瓜出嫁

树挂披彩霞流下口水
眼巴巴望着翠绿黄瓜
昨日刚饮瑞雪酒
今早喜送汝出嫁
许配谁家
身穿轻纱头戴花

露珠儿相伴一夜未睡
藤蔓哥精心酿制香茶
青果妹慕眼牵手
耳边再叙悄悄话
姐是福娃
新娘靓醉温哥华

弯弯村路走过“WTO”
解毒消肿真情德无价
千里婵娟润和谐
留取丹心誉天涯
何不潇洒
读懂了酸甜咸辣

2008-03-04 09:53:09
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詩盜喜裸評 ?2008-03-04 10:23:53?? Reply with quote


这黄瓜!还是嫁给黄瓜吧?应该~

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nobody ?2008-03-15 22:10:48?? Reply with quote


喜庆。问好。

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半溪明月 ?2008-03-15 22:59:14?? Reply with quote


朗朗上口,很喜庆~问好新朋友!

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雨木 ?2008-05-04 08:39:22?? Reply with quote


谢谢各位的提读,欢迎批评指正。问好并远握!

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