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枝俏弯着腰,不安地扭动
昨夜无风
仿佛从遥远的梦里醒来

吐芽的新绿上,有霜
白色的洁净怎会是伤害?

花儿开遍温室
地上墙上餐桌椅子厨房厕所还有
橱壁,拌着红红的,锈迹
栽培她们的是
污浊和上帝

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02/29/2008

2008-02-29 05:21:47
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是有缘 ?2008-02-29 05:26:17?? Reply with quote


上帝他睡了,你醒着,就由你来思考吧。

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詩盜喜裸評 ?2008-02-29 06:49:48?? Reply with quote


这是检讨啥呢?

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点点儿 ?2008-02-29 07:15:24?? Reply with quote


Tree~~~ Smile

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灯台小老鼠 ?2008-02-29 07:54:15?? Reply with quote


点点儿应该是小男孩吧

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点点儿 ?2008-02-29 08:20:21?? Reply with quote


haha, 小老鼠~~~~~

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点点儿 ?2008-02-29 08:21:20?? Reply with quote


是有缘 wrote:
上帝他睡了,你醒着,就由你来思考吧。


w/ your help:)

Morning``` Smile

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红袖添乱 ?2008-02-29 18:18:57?? Reply with quote


詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
这是检讨啥呢?


嗯。我也以为是检讨~~

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詩盜喜裸評 ?2008-03-02 17:10:56?? 恩~这的确是检讨,点点儿说是要检讨你的。 Reply with quote


內容!!

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詩盜喜裸評 ?2008-03-02 17:25:33?? 说小也不小,说男孩也不尽然!算只雌猫好了! Reply with quote


Re: 点点儿应该是小男孩吧

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