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晓月

晓月沉沉入目痴,
风声似语几更时?
从来好梦情难契,
夜尽霜凝一古诗

2008-02-28 21:38:40
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莹雪 ?2008-02-28 22:27:07?? Reply with quote


喜结句。

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是有缘 ?2008-02-29 05:33:48?? Reply with quote


谢谢莹雪喜欢。

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黄洋界 ?2008-02-29 06:40:17?? Reply with quote


凝练之作,晓月入目,风声似语,好梦难契,霜凝古诗,在短短的二十八字之内,容纳了许多景与情,欣赏.

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冰清 ?2008-02-29 14:04:43?? Reply with quote


晓月沉沉, 风声似语,神思体察,必凝好诗

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晓松 ?2008-02-29 19:17:47?? Reply with quote


入目痴不知几更时,情难契凝作一古诗。好诗~

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是有缘 ?2008-03-02 14:28:36?? Re: 凝练之作,晓月入目,风声似语,好梦难契,霜凝古... Reply with quote


黄洋界 wrote:
凝练之作,晓月入目,风声似语,好梦难契,霜凝古诗,在短短的二十八字之内,容纳了许多景与情,欣赏.


谢先生欣赏。

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是有缘 ?2008-03-02 14:29:38?? Re: 晓月沉沉, 风声似语,神思体察,必凝好诗 Reply with quote


冰清 wrote:
晓月沉沉, 风声似语,神思体察,必凝好诗


谢冰清老师鼓励。

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是有缘 ?2008-03-02 14:30:38?? Re: 入目痴不知几更时,情难契凝作一古诗。好诗... Reply with quote


晓松 wrote:
入目痴不知几更时,情难契凝作一古诗。好诗~


多谢晓松兄谬赞。

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