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如梦令

月入金樽不散
花惹相思一瓣
渐忘夜阑珊
秋透青衣微颤
稍慢
稍慢
未解今生牵绊

2008-02-27 21:35:26
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黄洋界 ?2008-02-28 07:07:24?? Reply with quote


虽属小令,韵味亦长,欣赏.

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晓松 ?2008-02-29 19:39:26?? Reply with quote


月入樽，花惹思，夜阑，秋凉......所有这些渲染，一句“未解今生牵绊”，圆满收住。好诗~

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莹雪 ?2008-02-29 23:30:22?? Reply with quote


韵浓意深。

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