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后工业时代的手写情书

让风擦亮你淡蓝的指甲
从键盘冰冷嘻戏中抬起脸
打开门,取出那枚珍藏的针

骆驼,风尘仆仆,从针眼中穿过
它出生第一声欢喜的啼哭中
有一封象形文字的手写情书

把微笑别在你盘起的发髻
骆驼和我一起引颈嘶鸣
嗯,往后的日子有我有你

让阳光,脱去我们所有的名牌内衣
然后,我们去撒哈拉或内华达
在沙漠深处营造一块绿地



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詩盜喜裸評 ?2008-02-03 07:47:03?? Reply with quote


穿杂牌内衣的咋办?欢迎微笑兄!谢谢赏光!

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爱爱 ?2008-02-03 11:14:49?? Reply with quote


只有一封啊? 不够分呢...... Sad

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hepingdao ?2008-02-03 11:57:46?? Reply with quote


从键盘到沙漠穿插的时光
你我在其间戏耍文字

问好并欢迎诗人拈花微笑
多来交流指导

Very Happy

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悠子 ?2008-02-03 13:08:24?? Reply with quote


还是需要手写~

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红袖添乱 ?2008-02-03 13:17:11?? Reply with quote


詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
穿杂牌内衣的咋办?欢迎微笑兄!谢谢赏光!



杂牌的可以留在身上。

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詩盜喜裸評 ?2008-02-03 14:23:17?? Reply with quote


红袖添乱 wrote:
诗盗喜裸评 wrote:
穿杂牌内衣的咋办?欢迎微笑兄!谢谢赏光!



杂牌的可以留在身上。


那我穿杂牌的去好了!否则有碍观瞻。

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点点儿 ?2008-02-03 15:10:55?? Reply with quote


好生涩哎````

快把粘著的花送偶瞧瞧 Very Happy

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点点儿 ?2008-02-03 15:13:40?? Reply with quote


hepingdao wrote:
从键盘到沙漠穿插的时光
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岛主的笑容很让人温暖那。。。嘻嘻```
问个好``` Very Happy

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白水 ?2008-02-03 16:03:46?? Reply with quote




欢迎新朋友, 送你个电灯泡. Very Happy

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