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???风走过,灯灭了,黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。

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滴在雪花上的阳光

谁不知道,我跟你一样高贵
风来临的时候,又何必
哭泣,嫉妒
打开古老的门,我与你的历史
同样伟大

你的诺言,挂在屋檐下
温暖着冬花的心情。惹恼的粉蝶
脱去外衣,裹起我娇媚的身影
拐弯到角落

季节不断把诗人崛起,我的脸
比雪花还要苍白,眼底的泪
躲进暖房,鄙视
郊外的烘烤,你只好带走
比黄花还要瘦的娇娘
中国,江苏,张敏

2008-01-24 18:58:47
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赵福治 ?2008-01-25 00:00:04?? Reply with quote


你的诺言,挂在屋檐下
温暖着冬花的心情。惹恼的粉蝶
脱去外衣,裹起我娇媚的身影
拐弯到角落
..................写到人的内心的一首.

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半溪明月 ?2008-01-25 01:02:34?? Reply with quote


题目很有诗意,切入角度好~

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嘉慕思 ?2008-01-25 01:09:33?? Reply with quote


娇娘如柳雨是梳
虹外斜阳香不住

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zhangmin ?2008-01-26 16:48:07?? Reply with quote


谢谢赵福治,谢谢半溪明月,谢谢嘉慕思,远握.

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赵福治 ?2008-01-27 15:49:15?? Reply with quote


季节不断把诗人崛起,我的脸
比雪花还要苍白.

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zhangmin ?2008-01-27 16:51:03?? Reply with quote


谢谢赵福治,远握 Very Happy

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贝多芬 ?2008-01-27 19:08:22?? Reply with quote


很多时候
孤独,让我们变的高贵

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zhangmin ?2008-01-31 20:56:26?? Reply with quote


谢谢贝多芬,远握.

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金金 ?2008-02-02 02:10:36?? Reply with quote


美丽的你

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