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高原浮落日，牧犬吠云帘。

草壮花尤丽，羊肥奶更鲜。

欢歌传耳际，快马到天边。

不觉时将暮，青春正扬鞭。

2008-01-08 13:57:39
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晓松 ?2008-01-08 15:40:12?? Reply with quote


草壮，羊肥，欢歌，快马，充满了浓郁的生活气息，好诗！

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暗香如沁 ?2008-01-09 02:31:29?? Reply with quote


好诗，生活气息浓郁．且结句提升整个诗意．

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冰清 ?2008-01-14 08:15:28?? Reply with quote


诗中画，画中诗！

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qinghongh ?2008-01-14 18:31:00?? Reply with quote


高原风情画。

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