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拜访并问好周道模老师,谢谢您给予我写作方面真诚的意见与建议,在今后的写作与学习中会更加注意的.

William Zhou周道模2008-04-21 05:54:45

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[原创双语诗] 几根白发逼我年轻

A Little White Hair Forces Me to be Young


Young plants grow again from the roots of rice

New green is added to my thought in Fall

Bright yellow of the straw in the fields

Is compressed on my crow's-feet

Youth has changed to the thunder on the horizon

Memories emaciated to the ridges of fields in hometown

The white hair that grew stealthly

Lashing my commonness and sleeping

All the white hair

Forces me to write poems in dreams

The white hair I will no longer remove

The lightning sparkling through my life

Warms my blood, calls my youth back

Wakens the poems in my dreams shockingly




几根白发逼我年轻


稻茬又发秧苗

我的秋思添上新绿

遍地稻草的金黄

缩成我眼角的细纹

青春成了天边的雷声

回忆瘦成故乡的田埂

窜出的白发

鞭打我平庸的沉寐

根根白发

逼我梦中写诗

我不再扯拨的白发啊

这划过生命的闪电

催热血潮 招回青春

把我梦中的诗句 惊醒

2003/10/15晨2:30梦醒 2:50草就

2007-12-13 18:09:47
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William Zhou周道模 ?2007-12-21 04:06:46?? Reply with quote


自改一次,大家再批。

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wq0066 ?2008-06-16 07:34:17?? Reply with quote


经典!好丰富的联想...

拜读好诗!

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William Zhou周道模 ?2008-07-12 16:45:14?? Reply with quote


0066鼓励我也!盼翻译家修正我的英语。

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戴永良 ?2008-07-27 19:16:29?? Reply with quote


拜读!

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