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????? ?????月光泉 Find all posts by 白水 冷雨2011-10-06 02:16:37问好临屏！
我想看到的就是古韵袅袅，其他的对我并不重要。 冷雨2010-12-24 06:15:09问候白水，圣诞节快乐！！
清源留字 亿七维2010-05-29 13:43:04问好白水！ 李盈枝2009-12-17 01:10:58过来拜读先生的新诗佳作，希望能从中汲取营养，以提高自己旧体诗词的习作水平。顺便向先生问好并致意。 君山楚女2009-11-22 15:55:12问候白水忘年兄。读您的作品，主我眼前一亮，慧心灵动。一篇好作品，一个好老师，确实能点破愚顽。 梦之2009-08-19 14:44:54向姐姐问好！ 很欣赏你的作品。
梦之 zmj1662009-08-17 02:34:36问好白水！ 万春来2009-06-13 16:49:42问候白水兄，前来问候！ 莹雪2009-06-07 16:35:14问好姐姐  |
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| 白水 ?2011-01-03 21:01:22?? |  |
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| 白水 ?2011-01-09 08:46:19?? teacher's suggestion | |
The poem for you
(1)
Do you really want to know the truth?
Yes, I was crying, after I read your message
the new year just came, why are you so upset?
please look
look at me, look deep into the brown eyes
under the cover
to find a fountain
It will clean your distress
(2)
I'd like to say
my favourite flower is a snowflake
look, look at her
in the chilly winter
she buries the death of late autumn
by using her white soul
when birds awaken the spring flowers
she drifts away with a sweet smile
(3)
You never mind a two-cent compliment
no matter if you have received it or not
everyday, your sweet waters an apple tree
just wait
wait the apples are falling down into children's hands
What a wonderful dream
you hide in the heart
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| 连南河 ?2011-02-06 06:56:29?? | |
A WONDERFUL DREAM WITH POEM!
HAPPY CHINESE NEW YEAR！
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| 白水 ?2011-02-09 17:34:20?? | |
| 连南河 wrote: |
A WONDERFUL DREAM WITH POEM!
HAPPY CHINESE NEW YEAR！ |
Hi, happy new year
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| 宁家珍 ?2011-02-10 06:21:58?? | |
(2)
I'd like to say
my favourite flower is a snowflake
look, look at her
in the chilly winter
she buries the death of late autumn
by using her white soul
when birds awaken the spring flowers
she drifts away with a sweet smile
How delightful the poem is!
Happy New Year!
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| 白水 ?2011-02-12 20:46:56?? | |
Thanks, happy new year.
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