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369913806 ?2009-08-02 03:06:43?? Reply with quote


驰怀江海远 纵目雪霜欣.好句,妙到毫巅!

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黄洋界 ?2009-08-02 15:17:20?? Reply with quote


感谢达夫,369兄阅评.

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胡恢宗 ?2009-08-07 20:18:29?? Reply with quote


好个“心灵巧运斤”!
真乃神来之笔。向老兄学习。

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孟东还 ?2009-08-07 21:07:36?? Reply with quote


黄洋界 wrote:
1907年写了一首小诗送呈馆主,1908年,馆主喜迁多伦多,并与多
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“因成是律”,所以“句”跟“灵”失粘了。

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黄洋界 ?2009-08-07 22:57:17?? Reply with quote


谢胡兄点评,谢孟兄指正.

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