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是有缘 ?2008-02-28 20:05:09?? Reply with quote


戴玨 wrote:
“天”和“话”出律了。


谢谢戴班长指点。

惭愧，自己的竟然没看出来。斟酌后再改过。

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是有缘 ?2008-02-28 20:07:07?? Reply with quote


notcoffee wrote:
狗尾续貂,步韵一首.
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多谢相和。

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