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钗头凤;七绝(二十首);五绝;鹧鸪天;诉衷情;临江仙;醉花间;七律;浣溪沙^_^

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青丝密,朱唇疾,俐牙伶舌娇喉力。
吟纳牖,咏牵柳,隐艳幽香,问新询旧。
某,某,某。

盈虚挹,圆亏息,玉卮交劝青衫泣。
徘徊久,觉焦朽,取蕊收花,送愁渊薮。
逗,逗,逗。

2007-08-25 05:58:45
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白水 ?2007-08-25 07:46:26?? Reply with quote


青丝密,朱唇疾,舌伶牙俐喉娇力。

袖袖好酷, 什么都能入词. Laughing

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莹雪 ?2007-08-25 16:24:42?? Reply with quote


以往欣赏此牌都是凄切哀婉之调,今天却是如此活泼轻巧。

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征尘载袖 ?2007-08-25 18:46:49?? Reply with quote


白水 Moonlight wrote:
青丝密,朱唇疾,舌伶牙俐喉娇力。

袖袖好酷, 什么都能入词. Laughing


姐姐,我把舌伶牙俐喉娇力改成俐牙伶舌娇喉力了^_^

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征尘载袖 ?2007-08-25 18:59:05?? Reply with quote


莹雪 wrote:
以往欣赏此牌都是凄切哀婉之调,今天却是如此活泼轻巧。


我熟悉熟悉词牌,等哪天心烦了再写凄切哀婉的哈^_^

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莹雪 ?2007-08-25 19:14:42?? Reply with quote


千万别心情不好,愿你天天快乐! Wink

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白水 ?2007-08-26 19:11:10?? Reply with quote


征尘载袖 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
青丝密,朱唇疾,舌伶牙俐喉娇力。

袖袖好酷, 什么都能入词. Laughing


姐姐,我把舌伶牙俐喉娇力改成俐牙伶舌娇喉力了^_^


MM, JJ这两日懒了一下, 真没见你的帖. 这一改,又当何说 Confused

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征尘载袖 ?2007-08-28 03:10:48?? Reply with quote


莹雪 wrote:
千万别心情不好,愿你天天快乐! Wink


谢谢!放心,我不会有苦说出来的^_^

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征尘载袖 ?2007-08-28 03:12:08?? Reply with quote


白水 Moonlight wrote:
MM, JJ这两日懒了一下, 真没见你的帖. 这一改,又当何说 Confused


姐姐,这样改,我自己读起来顺口^_^

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