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偷窥

偷窥

像馋猫闻见一条硕大
而新鲜的鱼
在哗哗地拨弄着水流
荡漾出难以抵御的诱惑
和幻想
踮着脚溜到门边
跪在地上,伺机出击
或在必要时把尾巴当作诱饵
从那通风的百叶窗
向里窥视
她背对着门,雾气中
有浪花扑倒的水草
和舞动的鱼鳍
血液从中间向两头
急窜
向下的激涨而炙热
向上的也同样激涨而炙热

2007.7.2上午

2007-07-01 20:30:26
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hepingdao ?2007-07-01 20:44:18?? Reply with quote


写得很有意思

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溪语 ?2007-07-02 02:46:57?? Reply with quote


呵呵.

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kino ?2007-07-02 17:15:47?? Reply with quote


乱写一首,我家的好色猫总喜欢在别人洗澡的时候趴在门上看。

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博弈 ?2007-07-03 00:48:20?? Reply with quote


kino wrote:
乱写一首,我家的好色猫总喜欢在别人洗澡的时候趴在门上看。


你怎么知道它在看的? Laughing

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半溪明月 ?2007-07-03 08:21:45?? Reply with quote


呵呵,我家也有只好色猫~写的有趣

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杨海军 ?2007-07-03 13:36:12?? Reply with quote


猫和人一样,都是欲望的。问好!! Smile

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kino ?2007-07-04 16:48:23?? Reply with quote


博弈 wrote:
kino wrote:
乱写一首,我家的好色猫总喜欢在别人洗澡的时候趴在门上看。


你怎么知道它在看的? Laughing


我在外面看到的阿~~~ Very Happy

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杯中冲浪 ?2008-01-07 15:33:17?? Reply with quote


哈哈,很有意思。博弈问得有趣。

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迪拜 ?2008-01-08 12:19:37?? Reply with quote


不错

有意思

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