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冷雨2011-10-06 02:16:37

问好临屏!
我想看到的就是古韵袅袅,其他的对我并不重要。

冷雨2010-12-24 06:15:09

问候白水,圣诞节快乐!!
清源留字

飞翔2010-10-23 18:06:10

问好! thanks byebye byebye byebye

亿七维2010-05-29 13:43:04

问好白水!

李盈枝2009-12-17 01:10:58

过来拜读先生的新诗佳作,希望能从中汲取营养,以提高自己旧体诗词的习作水平。顺便向先生问好并致意。

君山楚女2009-11-22 15:55:12

问候白水忘年兄。读您的作品,主我眼前一亮,慧心灵动。一篇好作品,一个好老师,确实能点破愚顽。

梦之2009-08-19 14:44:54

向姐姐问好! 很欣赏你的作品。

梦之

zmj1662009-08-17 02:34:36

问好白水!

万春来2009-06-13 16:49:42

问候白水兄,前来问候!

莹雪2009-06-07 16:35:14

问好姐姐 thanks

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Lotus Village

荷乡

芙蓉鼎盛时
夏便疯了
晨朝晖,暮也朝晖
热浪燥浮着满池漂絮
你不得不退避三舍,静候
秋凉时,摘一捧清香的莲子
待冬夜品羹观雪
乐得恬逸

Lotus Village

When lotuses are in full bloom
the summer turns mad
the morning starts with a scorcher, as well as the evening
heat wave floats petals in a pool
you had to step back to your place
until the autumn comes
to pick up some fragrant lotus seeds
on a winter night, we will sip the soup and watch snow flakes
how much more leisure and comfort a life can get.

2013-03-22 01:20:20
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William Zhou周道模 ?2013-03-22 05:32:17?? Reply with quote


through the life of lotus?

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白水 ?2013-03-22 20:29:26?? Reply with quote


Hi,William
It is depending on the reader, everyone can get their own images
here are other
http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?t=38582

Have a nice weekend

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hepingdao ?2013-03-22 23:56:29?? Reply with quote


When lotuses in full bloom,
the summer turns mad.
The morning starts with a scorcher. So does the evening

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白水 ?2013-03-23 00:16:49?? Reply with quote


thanks, peace
I like the phrase: " the summer turns mad.", and changed it。

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Lake ?2013-03-25 23:01:57?? Reply with quote


同意 hepingdao 的句型 " so does the evening".

标点符号和大小写显得有些随意了.

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SLIU ?2013-03-26 13:23:15?? Reply with quote


待冬夜品羹观雪
乐得恬逸

好惬意。。

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白水 ?2013-03-30 10:33:29?? Reply with quote


Lake wrote:
同意 hepingdao 的句型 " so does the evening".
...


鸟宿池边树,僧敲月下门。每个人对诗歌的感觉不同吧,推敲了几日,还是忍痛舍弃了“推”。
Anyway,thank you for your suggestion
have a nice weekend

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白水 ?2013-03-30 10:40:32?? Reply with quote


SLIU wrote:
待冬夜品羹观雪
乐得恬逸

好惬意。。


Thanks 466. I remember that you love it Very Happy

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SLIU ?2013-03-31 10:11:42?? Reply with quote


白水 Moonlight wrote:
SLIU wrote:
待冬夜品羹观雪
乐得恬逸

好惬意。。


Thanks 466. I remember that you love it Very Happy


you know what, 6 is my lucky number Very Happy

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