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《掌心的水》

《掌心的水》

风,吹落一弯睫毛
在掌心留下了一道痕
十指并拢,握住了什么
象水

晃悠的白
攥折了弯曲的纹,断续
牵起一种思想
象风


2008-03-10 22:15:35
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点点儿 ?2008-03-11 06:36:59?? Reply with quote


水流情
风传思
睫眉弯弯百合悠
随心走~~~

合心好~ Smile

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悠子 ?2008-03-11 07:18:52?? Reply with quote


情似水
思如风

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詩盜喜裸評 ?2008-03-11 07:21:56?? Reply with quote


俺对这(吹落一弯睫毛)有意见!

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点点儿 ?2008-03-11 07:44:31?? Me too, Reply with quote


詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
俺对这(吹落一弯睫毛)有意见!


吹弯2 liu 睫毛~~~?

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苏茉儿 ?2008-03-11 07:46:09?? Reply with quote


嗯,吹落一点思念,,,,
吹落眉睫上一点思念,,,,

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詩盜喜裸評 ?2008-03-11 07:52:03?? Reply with quote


解谜底:风大!一小姑娘以手拂面,假睫毛给弄落了!真是尴尬~手心紧紧握着,这一紧张!手心泌出汗来。

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苏茉儿 ?2008-03-11 07:54:10?? Re: 解谜底:风大!一小姑娘以手拂面,假睫毛给... Reply with quote


詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
解谜底:风大!一小姑娘以手拂面,假睫毛给弄落了!真是尴尬~手心紧紧握着,这一紧张!手心泌出汗来。


喂~~~你要是把美人得罪了,别找我们哭你,,,

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苏茉儿 ?2008-03-11 07:54:29?? Reply with quote


不对,是一滴思念。。。。

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詩盜喜裸評 ?2008-03-11 08:03:27?? Reply with quote


放心!合心人长得漂亮,个性又温柔。听说从不发脾气!

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