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发表于: 2007-10-05 12:11:39 发表主题: This Close |
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This Close
Never been so close
like this to the autumn -
By the corn field
in the early morning
thin fogs, orange tinged -
a gauze curtain hanging
over the reaped field where
geese and ducks rummage,
filling their stomachs with
harvest leftovers.
Maple leaves fall,
chrysanthemums bloom.
The birds, cloud-white
bellied, have grown
strong wings, propelling
them through the air. Where
are they heading to?
Only the wind knows.
So excited, so close -
a shower of feathery flapping
above the car roof
on the lake of mind
One flock, then two, then three
wild geese, honking, here
and there, higher and farther
no guide needed
leaving the sky
with no
???????????trace…?????????
.??? _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins |
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William Zhou周道模 探花
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发表于: 2007-10-05 14:56:39 发表主题: |
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So right am I! Bright fall is on your side. I'm living in rainy days, but you are enjoying beautiful country views, and you bring us the charming poem and the wild geese ... So I envy you ! _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
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kokho 进士出身
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I enjoy this very much...
Lake has come a long way
.. _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌 |
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Lake 举人
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发表于: 2007-10-19 08:35:10 发表主题: |
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So right am I! Bright fall is on your side. I'm living in rainy days, but you are enjoying beautiful country views, and you bring us the charming poem and the wild geese ... So I envy you ! |
Can you imagine it is not a country view but a city scene?
It is a piece of land set aside for agricultural experiment, where I drive by very often on my way to work.
Thanks for liking it. _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins |
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Lake 举人
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I enjoy this very much...
Lake has come a long way
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Thanks for your kind words, Kokho. There is still a long long way to go... _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins |
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William Zhou周道模 探花
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发表于: 2007-10-22 02:04:55 发表主题: |
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Mr. Lake,
I cannot imagine the beautifuf scene is in the city in Canada! I saw some
wild geese in Xinjiang a month ago, but I can never see them in any cities in China, maybe I can see in my dream. I still envy all of you! _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
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博弈 榜眼
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接近吗? 辜构,好玩。(google translate http://www.google.com/translate_t?langpair=en|zh-CN)
这种密切
从未如此接近
像这样到秋天-
由玉米田
在清晨
薄雾,橙色彩-
一纱布窗帘挂
一年赚领域
鹅鸭翻腾,
加油站的穷人
收获剩菜。
枫叶秋天
菊花盛开。
鸟,云白
腹,成长
坚强的翅膀,推进
他们通过空中。凡
他们的标题是什么?
只有风知道。
太激动了,这么近的-
淋浴的羽毛扑
上述汽车车顶
关于湖心
其中一群,那么两,三个,然后
雁, honking ,这里
因此,更高,更远
没有必要的引导
离开天空
无
迹… … _________________ (在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美) |
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Lake 举人
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William 的猜测 ... _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins |
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Lake 举人
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发表于: 2007-10-24 17:07:58 发表主题: |
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接近吗? 辜构,好玩。(google translate http://www.google.com/translate_t?langpair=en|zh-CN)
这种密切
从未如此接近
像这样到秋天-
由玉米田
在清晨
薄雾,橙色彩-
一纱布窗帘挂
一年赚领域
鹅鸭翻腾,
加油站的穷人
收获剩菜。
枫叶秋天
菊花盛开。
鸟,云白
腹,成长
坚强的翅膀,推进
他们通过空中。凡
他们的标题是什么?
只有风知道。
太激动了,这么近的-
淋浴的羽毛扑
上述汽车车顶
关于湖心
其中一群,那么两,三个,然后
雁, honking ,这里
因此,更高,更远
没有必要的引导
离开天空
无
迹… … |
咋儿想起玩儿这个了呢?把你那个 'twixt ape and Plato也谷歌一下,看效果如何?
嗯,是挺接近的,满忠诚的。 很佩服它的 “智能”,
能够推断出 食 leftovers 的 就是 “穷人”。 佩服得紧啊。
另外,想学另类文字的,跟它学。 _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins |
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William Zhou周道模 探花
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发表于: 2007-10-24 17:08:11 发表主题: |
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谢谢博弈提供的翻译网站!
google ,中国大陆翻译成 “ 谷歌”。
顺问:wild geese
是“雁”还是“天鹅”? _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
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Lake 举人
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再辜构还原, 真是笑死人。 这下我信了,不懂英文的中国人也可以在网上和讲英文的老外交流 ...
Such close
Never so close
To fall like this --
From Cornfield
In the early morning
Mist, orange color --
Pegged to a gauze curtain
The area earned a year
Ducks and geese dive,
Poor gas station
Harvest leftovers.
Maple Leaf fall
Chrysanthemums bloom.
Bird, White Cloud
Abdominal, growth
Strong wings, advancing
Through their air. Where
Their title?
Only Wind know.
So excited. So close --
A shower of feathers flutter
The car roof
On the lake
A group of them, then two or three, and then
Wild geese, honking, here
Therefore, higher, farther
The guide is not necessary
Leave the sky
No
Trace ... _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins |
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博弈 榜眼
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发表于: 2007-10-24 22:40:16 发表主题: |
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William Zhou周道模 写到: |
谢谢博弈提供的翻译网站!
google ,中国大陆翻译成 “ 谷歌”。
顺问:wild geese
是“雁”还是“天鹅”? |
雁翻成wild geese应该还是可以的。
相对而言,天鹅脖长,”嘴“宽;而雁翼较长,足和尾较短。
个见,有错请更正。
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博弈 榜眼
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再辜构还原, 真是笑死人。 这下我信了,不懂英文的中国人也可以在网上和讲英文的老外交流 ...
Such close
Never so close
To fall like this --
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I think you got it! _________________ (在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美) |
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请问 Lake: 您看见的是雁还是天鹅? 如是大雁、野鸭之类,北京的玉渊潭公园也有。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
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Lake 写到: |
再辜构还原, 真是笑死人。 这下我信了,不懂英文的中国人也可以在网上和讲英文的老外交流 ...
Such close
Never so close
To fall like this --
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I dwelled on the word "fall" . Yes, I'm going down the hill, but not ready to fall at this fall yet. Sure, everyone, evrything will inevitably fall someday.
_________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins |
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Lake 举人
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请问 Lake: 您看见的是雁还是天鹅? 如是大雁、野鸭之类,北京的玉渊潭公园也有。 |
惭愧,我五谷不分。 我看到的是 wild geese, 身边的人都这么说,那我也这么叫。
分享一个 video clip, Winged Migration, gloriously beautiful.
http://www.sonyclassics.com/wingedmigration/home.html _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins |
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kokho 进士出身
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再读 特喜欢这段,可以是独立的得诗歌 :0
One flock, then two, then three
wild geese, honking, here
and there, higher and farther
no guide needed
leaving the sky
with no
???????????trace…?????????
.???
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