This Close

[Lake]

This Close

Never been so close
like this to the autumn -
By the corn field
in the early morning
thin fogs, orange tinged -
a gauze curtain hanging
over the reaped field where
geese and ducks rummage,
filling their stomachs with
harvest leftovers.

Maple leaves fall,
chrysanthemums bloom.

The birds, cloud-white
bellied, have grown
strong wings, propelling
them through the air. Where
are they heading to?
Only the wind knows.
So excited, so close -
a shower of feathery flapping
above the car roof
on the lake of mind

One flock, then two, then three
wild geese, honking, here
and there, higher and farther
no guide needed
leaving the sky
with no
???????????trace…?????????

.???
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the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

[William Zhou周道模]

So right am I! Bright fall is on your side. I'm living in rainy days, but you are enjoying beautiful country views, and you bring us the charming poem and the wild geese ... So I envy you !
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诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
周道模

[kokho]

。

I enjoy this very much...

Lake has come a long way



..
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乒乓、摄影、诗歌

[Lake]

[Lake]

[William Zhou周道模]

Mr. Lake,
I cannot imagine the beautifuf scene is in the city in Canada! I saw some
wild geese in Xinjiang a month ago, but I can never see them in any cities in China, maybe I can see in my dream. I still envy all of you!
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诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
周道模

[博弈]

接近吗？ 辜构，好玩。（google translate http://www.google.com/translate_t?langpair=en|zh-CN)

这种密切

从未如此接近
像这样到秋天-
由玉米田
在清晨
薄雾，橙色彩-
一纱布窗帘挂
一年赚领域
鹅鸭翻腾，
加油站的穷人
收获剩菜。

枫叶秋天
菊花盛开。

鸟，云白
腹，成长
坚强的翅膀，推进
他们通过空中。凡
他们的标题是什么？
只有风知道。
太激动了，这么近的-
淋浴的羽毛扑
上述汽车车顶
关于湖心

其中一群，那么两，三个，然后
雁， honking ，这里
因此，更高，更远
没有必要的引导
离开天空
无
迹… …
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（在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

[Lake]

William 的猜测 ...
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the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

[Lake]

[William Zhou周道模]

谢谢博弈提供的翻译网站！
google ，中国大陆翻译成 “ 谷歌”。
顺问：wild geese
是“雁”还是“天鹅”？
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诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
周道模

[Lake]

再辜构还原, 真是笑死人。 这下我信了，不懂英文的中国人也可以在网上和讲英文的老外交流 ...

Such close

Never so close
To fall like this --
From Cornfield
In the early morning
Mist, orange color --
Pegged to a gauze curtain
The area earned a year
Ducks and geese dive,
Poor gas station
Harvest leftovers.

Maple Leaf fall
Chrysanthemums bloom.

Bird, White Cloud
Abdominal, growth
Strong wings, advancing
Through their air. Where
Their title?
Only Wind know.
So excited. So close --
A shower of feathers flutter
The car roof
On the lake

A group of them, then two or three, and then
Wild geese, honking, here
Therefore, higher, farther
The guide is not necessary
Leave the sky
No
Trace ...
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the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

[博弈]

[博弈]

[William Zhou周道模]

请问 Lake: 您看见的是雁还是天鹅？ 如是大雁、野鸭之类，北京的玉渊潭公园也有。
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诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
周道模

[Lake]

[Lake]

[kokho]

。

再读 特喜欢这段，可以是独立的得诗歌 ：0



One flock, then two, then three
wild geese, honking, here
and there, higher and farther
no guide needed
leaving the sky
with no
???????????trace…?????????

.???
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乒乓、摄影、诗歌