Lake 举人
  
  注册时间: 2007-01-09 帖子: 1286
  Lake北美枫文集 | 
		
		
			
				 发表于: 2007-07-10 12:05:02    发表主题: short poems(1-10) | 
				     | 
			 
			
				
  | 
			 
			
				1
 
pollen rides the air 
 
shut myself in, green unfolds 
 
outside the window
 
 
2
 
for it is only a bad dream 
 
that'll shatter under the sun 
 
flowers bloom, birds sing
 
 
3
 
after the storm 
 
a clear blue sky 
 
wishes carried by kite
 
 
4
 
waiting for the call 
 
spring's gone, winter's come 
 
frost on his temples
 
 
5
 
to a new color of life 
 
breaking free from cocoon 
 
sings a butterfly
 
 
6
 
in the rain 
 
soaked to the skin
 
mind cleansed
 
 
7
 
no time to look back 
 
clearing way for future 
 
travelers hasten on
 
 
8
 
summer's sweet air 
 
filled with fireworks and beer 
 
a sleepless night
 
 
9
 
when I was a child 
 
mom 'n dad were my gardeners 
 
I their nightingale
 
 
10
 
haiku reigns 
 
sounds like a full stop with 
 
an exclamation! _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins | 
			 
		  | 
	
	
		| 返页首 | 
		
		
		 | 
	
	
		  | 
		  | 
	
	
		  | 
	
	
		William Zhou周道模 探花
 
  注册时间: 2007-06-10 帖子: 3950 来自: 中国四川广汉 William Zhou周道模北美枫文集 | 
		
		
			
				 发表于: 2007-07-11 08:33:38    发表主题:  | 
				     | 
			 
			
				
  | 
			 
			
				I've read and learned your short poems,thank you ,Lake! Have you read my
 
Chinese poem "青海湖"? _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
 
                                       周道模 | 
			 
		  | 
	
	
		| 返页首 | 
		
		
		 | 
	
	
		  | 
		  | 
	
	
		  | 
	
	
		kokho 进士出身
  
  注册时间: 2006-11-30 帖子: 2642 来自: Singapore kokho北美枫文集 | 
		
		
			
				 发表于: 2007-07-11 13:49:33    发表主题:  | 
				     | 
			 
			
				
  | 
			 
			
				这次 有水准 一个字都改不动...
 
 
            
 
 
. _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌 | 
			 
		  | 
	
	
		| 返页首 | 
		
		
		 | 
	
	
		  | 
		  | 
	
	
		  | 
	
	
		Lake 举人
  
  注册时间: 2007-01-09 帖子: 1286
  Lake北美枫文集 | 
		
		
			
				 发表于: 2007-07-11 19:40:39    发表主题:  | 
				     | 
			 
			
				
  | 
			 
			
				
 
	  | William Zhou周道模 写到: | 
	 
	
	  I've read and learned your short poems,thank you ,Lake! Have read my
 
Chinese poem "青海湖"? | 
	 
 
 
 
William, 等会儿我过去看看,不知道能否找到。 
 
谢谢你来读我的小诗。 _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins | 
			 
		  | 
	
	
		| 返页首 | 
		
		
		 | 
	
	
		  | 
		  | 
	
	
		  | 
	
	
		Lake 举人
  
  注册时间: 2007-01-09 帖子: 1286
  Lake北美枫文集 | 
		
		
			
				 发表于: 2007-07-11 19:53:13    发表主题:  | 
				     | 
			 
			
				
  | 
			 
			
				
 
	  | kokho 写到: | 
	 
	
	  这次 有水准 一个字都改不动...
 
 
            
 
 
. | 
	 
 
 
 
真是这样吗? 这几首真的是玩儿出来的,大杂烩。
 
 
要不要去看看我的打油《两写》?你的五写不容易,所以先两写。
 
肯定需要大手术。   
 
 
http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?t=6589 _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins | 
			 
		  | 
	
	
		| 返页首 | 
		
		
		 | 
	
	
		  | 
		  | 
	
	
		  | 
	
	
		 |