Lake 举人
注册时间: 2007-01-09 帖子: 1286
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发表于: 2007-07-10 12:05:02 发表主题: short poems(1-10) |
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pollen rides the air
shut myself in, green unfolds
outside the window
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for it is only a bad dream
that'll shatter under the sun
flowers bloom, birds sing
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after the storm
a clear blue sky
wishes carried by kite
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waiting for the call
spring's gone, winter's come
frost on his temples
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to a new color of life
breaking free from cocoon
sings a butterfly
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in the rain
soaked to the skin
mind cleansed
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no time to look back
clearing way for future
travelers hasten on
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summer's sweet air
filled with fireworks and beer
a sleepless night
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when I was a child
mom 'n dad were my gardeners
I their nightingale
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haiku reigns
sounds like a full stop with
an exclamation! _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins |
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William Zhou周道模 探花
注册时间: 2007-06-10 帖子: 3950 来自: 中国四川广汉 William Zhou周道模北美枫文集 |
发表于: 2007-07-11 08:33:38 发表主题: |
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I've read and learned your short poems,thank you ,Lake! Have you read my
Chinese poem "青海湖"? _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
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kokho 进士出身
注册时间: 2006-11-30 帖子: 2642 来自: Singapore kokho北美枫文集 |
发表于: 2007-07-11 13:49:33 发表主题: |
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这次 有水准 一个字都改不动...
. _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌 |
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Lake 举人
注册时间: 2007-01-09 帖子: 1286
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发表于: 2007-07-11 19:40:39 发表主题: |
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William Zhou周道模 写到: |
I've read and learned your short poems,thank you ,Lake! Have read my
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William, 等会儿我过去看看,不知道能否找到。
谢谢你来读我的小诗。 _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins |
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Lake 举人
注册时间: 2007-01-09 帖子: 1286
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发表于: 2007-07-11 19:53:13 发表主题: |
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kokho 写到: |
这次 有水准 一个字都改不动...
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真是这样吗? 这几首真的是玩儿出来的,大杂烩。
要不要去看看我的打油《两写》?你的五写不容易,所以先两写。
肯定需要大手术。
http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?t=6589 _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins |
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