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次韵老山《吟韵》
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PostPosted: 2011-02-21 15:33:07    Post subject: 次韵老山《吟韵》 Reply with quote

次韵老山《吟韵》

雕彤题画喜龙吟,
虎啸山丘处处闻。
吟得从容气出唱,
此身未驾已销魂。


注: 老山工诗文,善吟唱.曾送我一吟唱专碟.
其唱腔高低起伏和停顿转折的抑扬顿挫之气,
能演绎诗词的声情、意境和律韵之美,使我受
益良多.
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2011-02-21 19:46:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

“喜龙吟”“已销魂”,冰清雅韵耳暂明!

欣赏佳作!
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PostPosted: 2011-02-22 03:36:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

虎啸龙吟处处闻,从容吟得已销魂。

问好冰清老师!欣赏学习唱和之作。
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PostPosted: 2011-02-22 07:24:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

雕彤題画喜龙吟 - 妙句!
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PostPosted: 2011-02-22 09:10:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

虎啸龙吟,十分难得!现在能吟诵古韵的人已不多。
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PostPosted: 2011-02-22 12:04:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢朋友们的鼓励。
现在能吟诵古韵和爱吟诵古韵的人确实不多了。 Crying or Very sad
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PostPosted: 2011-02-22 13:28:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰清好自私耶, 怎么不给我们听 Exclamation Exclamation Exclamation Exclamation Exclamation Exclamation Wink
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PostPosted: 2011-02-24 08:00:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

此身未驾已销魂。
吟出了氣氛,令人遐想不已。
常說吟詩,其實今人能吟詩者已經寥寥無幾了,羨慕中。
問候冰清先生。
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冰清
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PostPosted: 2011-02-24 10:51:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
冰清好自私耶, 怎么不给我们听 Exclamation Exclamation Exclamation Exclamation Exclamation Exclamation Wink


白水,近水楼台啊,先给个链接吧:http://oson.ca/viewforum.php?f=165
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PostPosted: 2011-02-24 11:08:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

王君明 wrote:
此身未驾已销魂。
吟出了氣氛,令人遐想不已。
常說吟詩,其實今人能吟詩者已經寥寥無幾了,羨慕中。
問候冰清先生。
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君明,垂垂老矣! Rolling Eyes
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PostPosted: 2011-03-06 09:10:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰清 wrote:
次韵老山《吟韵》

雕彤题画喜龙吟,
虎啸山丘处处闻。
吟得从容气出唱,
此身未驾已销魂。


注: 老山工诗文,善吟唱.曾送我一吟唱专碟.
...


冰清老师大作和得甚妙,学习了。
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PostPosted: 2011-03-08 16:46:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

节日愉快
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PostPosted: 2011-03-13 00:28:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

在冰清老师带动下,我也和了一首:
步韵和老山兄〈吟咏〉
曾听老友作龙吟,诗会咏坛时有闻。
常见同仁夸韵雅,古声古调令销魂。
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