| 冰清 同进士出身
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2011-02-21 15:33:07    Post subject: 次韵老山《吟韵》 |   |  
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				| 次韵老山《吟韵》 
 雕彤题画喜龙吟,
 虎啸山丘处处闻。
 吟得从容气出唱,
 此身未驾已销魂。
 
 注: 老山工诗文,善吟唱.曾送我一吟唱专碟.
 其唱腔高低起伏和停顿转折的抑扬顿挫之气,
 能演绎诗词的声情、意境和律韵之美,使我受
 益良多.
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		| 黄洋界 探花
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2011-02-21 19:46:38    Post subject: |   |  
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				| “喜龙吟”“已销魂”,冰清雅韵耳暂明! 
 欣赏佳作!
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		| 笑聊 探花
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2011-02-22 03:36:10    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 虎啸龙吟处处闻,从容吟得已销魂。 
 问好冰清老师!欣赏学习唱和之作。
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		| 白云闲人 探花
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2011-02-22 07:24:23    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 雕彤題画喜龙吟 - 妙句! _________________
 诗中岁月,
 笛里关山.
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		| qinghongh 榜眼
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2011-02-22 09:10:12    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 虎啸龙吟,十分难得!现在能吟诵古韵的人已不多。 |  | 
	
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		| 冰清 同进士出身
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2011-02-22 12:04:36    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 谢谢朋友们的鼓励。 现在能吟诵古韵和爱吟诵古韵的人确实不多了。
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2011-02-22 13:28:18    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 冰清好自私耶, 怎么不给我们听              |  | 
	
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		| 王君明 秀才
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2011-02-24 08:00:22    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 此身未驾已销魂。 吟出了氣氛,令人遐想不已。
 常說吟詩,其實今人能吟詩者已經寥寥無幾了,羨慕中。
 問候冰清先生。
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 虚拟网络 真实生活
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		| 冰清 同进士出身
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2011-02-24 10:51:32    Post subject: |   |  
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	  | 白水 Moonlight wrote: |  
	  | 冰清好自私耶, 怎么不给我们听              |  
 白水,近水楼台啊,先给个链接吧:http://oson.ca/viewforum.php?f=165
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		| 冰清 同进士出身
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2011-02-24 11:08:51    Post subject: |   |  
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	  | 王君明 wrote: |  
	  | 此身未驾已销魂。 吟出了氣氛,令人遐想不已。
 常說吟詩,其實今人能吟詩者已經寥寥無幾了,羨慕中。
 問候冰清先生。
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 |  君明,垂垂老矣!
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		| 秋叶 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2011-03-06 09:10:57    Post subject: |   |  
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	  | 冰清 wrote: |  
	  | 次韵老山《吟韵》 
 雕彤题画喜龙吟,
 虎啸山丘处处闻。
 吟得从容气出唱,
 此身未驾已销魂。
 
 注: 老山工诗文,善吟唱.曾送我一吟唱专碟.
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 冰清老师大作和得甚妙,学习了。
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2011-03-08 16:46:09    Post subject: |   |  
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		| 胡恢宗 秀才
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2011-03-13 00:28:40    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 在冰清老师带动下,我也和了一首: 步韵和老山兄〈吟咏〉
 曾听老友作龙吟,诗会咏坛时有闻。
 常见同仁夸韵雅,古声古调令销魂。
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 水曲云烟绕 林深鸟竞飞
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