博弈 榜眼
注册时间: 2006-12-21 帖子: 4381 来自: SFO 博弈北美枫文集 |
发表于: 2010-10-28 21:56:56 发表主题: Poe-tree |
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Poe-tree
"When does a poem start
Father
It starts all
before it begins
and most likely for this one
it started before
you were born
before I was born
let's say
grand grand time ago
You see
a poem is like a pear
in your hand it starts
from the flower
out of its stem
trunk and root
and then the earth
where we all
e v e n t u a l l y
rest in peace
My son
so when you take a fruit
there appreciate a poem _________________ (在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美) |
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Lake 举人
注册时间: 2007-01-09 帖子: 1286
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发表于: 2010-10-29 11:54:07 发表主题: |
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A conversation between a father and son, a different way of root-seeking. I like the title, it makes me connect with "poetry". I'm not sure I understand the punctuation used at the beginning of the poem where you quote the poem but without unquote at the end. One thing I can think of is the talk continues... I maybe off the mark (no pun intended). _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins |
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William Zhou周道模 探花
注册时间: 2007-06-10 帖子: 3950 来自: 中国四川广汉 William Zhou周道模北美枫文集 |
发表于: 2010-10-30 05:41:00 发表主题: |
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对话、故事中出诗意,当代美国英语诗的时尚? _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
周道模 |
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非马 秀才
注册时间: 2006-06-22 帖子: 907 来自: 芝加哥 非马北美枫文集 |
发表于: 2010-10-30 16:20:32 发表主题: |
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An interesting poem. I don't think you need any quote. It's clear who's speaking. _________________ 欢迎访问<非马艺术世界>
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博弈 榜眼
注册时间: 2006-12-21 帖子: 4381 来自: SFO 博弈北美枫文集 |
发表于: 2010-10-31 21:45:58 发表主题: |
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Thank you all.
Indeed, that quotation mark isn't a must, I hesitated there too.
I put it there to symbolize there is no "end quote", or "not finished" yet.
Guess it's a bit of a stretch.
Besides borrowing the word poetry, POE could also mean Point of Entry/Embarkation, well, a thought only.
时尚 or not, I don't know, but it's been there.
Happy Holiday. _________________ (在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美) |
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