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【试译非马】表演者

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2009-09-12 15:40:41 Post subject: 【试译非马】表演者

Performers by William Marr The performing monkey Stretches out its hand Like a man Asking the spectators For money The performing man Stretches out his hand Like a monkey Asking the monkey For money 表演者非马作周道模译那只表演的猴子伸出它的手像人一样向那些围观的人要…… 钱…… 那个表演的人伸出他的手像猴子一样向那只猴子要…… 钱…… _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2009-09-21 07:10:28 Post subject:

nice one. no crits. _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2009-09-21 17:31:13 Post subject:

Thank you for reading and encouraging! _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2009-11-01 21:28:14 Post subject:

谢谢道模.好译. _________________ 欢迎访问<非马艺术世界> http://feima.yidian.org/bmz.htm

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2009-11-03 02:18:33 Post subject:

谢谢非马老师的鼓励！这期《三星堆文学》编了我译自《秋窗》的大作，快要出刊了。出来我马上奉寄样刊。问好！ _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2009-11-03 08:19:48 Post subject:

William Zhou周道模 wrote:

谢谢非马老师的鼓励！这期《三星堆文学》编了我译自《秋窗》的大作，快要出刊了。出来我马上奉寄样刊。问好！

谢谢! 让你破费了. 问好.
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http://feima.yidian.org/bmz.htm

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Posted: 2010-01-01 05:16:47 Post subject: 试译：表演者

表演的猴像人一样伸出手向观众要报酬表演的人像猴子一样伸出手向猴子要报酬或者：演猴似人伸出手恳求观众给报酬演员似猴伸出手恳求猴子给报酬

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Posted: 2010-01-03 10:36:04 Post subject:

Welcome sliu! Of the two, I prefer your first version. Looking forward to your contribution. Best, Lake _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

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Posted: 2010-01-04 02:14:59 Post subject:

Lake wrote:

Welcome sliu!
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Thanks, Lake. Agree with you.... ^_^

Happy New Year!!

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